Date: 2022-08-07 05:27 pm (UTC)
chrisisofaith: (1- Really Don't Understand You)
[He doesn't point out that, even if he did laugh, Martin wouldn't know...especially not when he's genuinely thrilled to him to agree.]

That's not terrible at all! Maybe a little hiccup in a place or two, but I love it.

Poems are like snippets of story and you hooked by end, so I'd say it was exactly as it should be.
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